“Alice!” screamed some creature, “Look out!”. Alice slowly crawled on the ground and bumped into a tree, but she had no idea that this tree was one of a kind.
“ Weird girl, you just bumped to my magical tree!” purred the purple cat, “This is my purr-fect home.” The purple cat just left her with no clue what was happening. She walked and came across a tea party and asked to join. Suddenly the ground started SHAKING. “AHHHH!” screamed Alice... After all, it was just a dream, but strangely the next day there was a teacup outside of her garden.
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Millie 5k charter international school
3/15/2018 10:32:14 am
I liked the way that you were using the idea of Alice in wonderland.
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June (Y5k)
3/15/2018 10:38:56 am
Your story was really fun to read I wanted to find out what was going to find out next! This story really hooked me!
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